| I like the way you blend rhymes with non-rhyming, old English with modern, and the imagery of water and land. I'd enjoy reading more of your writing. I love to read, appreciate complexity and fantasy is my favorite genre.
Have you ever read Frank L. Baum? I have all 14 books about the Land of Oz (Sorry V, not your Oz) and started reading them when I was in second grade, the age group they were intended for. Today I bet that they would be a challenge for most junior high schoolers. Generally we don't make literature more complex for older students, we just use more adult themes. Rrrrr!
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